Nu ([info]quiet_rebel) wrote,

Back-up fic for the Sarkney ficathon

It's a quickie, but it has a zing to it, I think.

“Nothing But”
Alias
For the Sarkney ficathon
Requested by [info]vaznetti
Requirements: mention of Irina, angst, water
Rating: PG-13


The last time she was in this position, she was fighting to stay alive.

She felt a hand pull her head back. She gasped for air as the water droplets ran down her face. She blinked several times until her eyes focused.

“Had enough?” asked the cool voice.

She licked her lips and glanced up at the calm face. “So, when are you going to toss in the apples, Sark?”

He curled his lip in anger and pushed her head back underwater.

She didn’t mind; it was quiet there. Sydney opened her eyes, her chest constricting with each breath she held in. She wiggled her hands, but it only caused the handcuffs to chafe against her wrists. Her body lurched forward as Sark pushed her head deeper into the pool of water.

God, she was going to pass out. This was it. The end of Sydney Bristow.

She shut her eyes again, counting down the seconds until the lack of oxygen killed her.

One, two, three, four, five, six, sev—

“Son of a bitch!” Her eyes flew open as Sark pulled her out of the water by her hair. She inhaled, her lungs expanded gratefully.

Sark smirked. “Did you really think I would drown you, Sydney?”

She tossed her head back, drops of water dripping off her dark strands of hair. She stared at him silently.

“You haven’t given me the information I need.” He reached for a towel and proceeded to dry her face. She recoiled from his touch. “I’m trying to be a gentleman here.”

Sydney rolled her eyes. “What gentleman chains a woman to a chair and threatens her life?”

Sark tried to wipe her face again. She let him this time. “That would be me.” His mouth turned into another smirk. He finished drying her face and dropped the towel. “Now, are you going to answer my questions?”

“Depends on the questions.”

“Why do you always have to be like this?” Sark asked with a tilt of his head.

“Like what?”

“Foolish.”

Now Sydney tilted her head. “How am I foolish?”

“You’re willing to die. Right now. You’re willing to die.” He stepped back and leaned against the counter in the dark basement. “And for what? Your country? Do you know how incredibly idiotic that sounds?”

“We’re not that different, Sark,” she said.

He kept his head at an angle.

“You’re willing to die for your employer,” Sydney said. “Just how I’m willing to die for mine. What it all comes down to is the cause you’re willing to die for.” She crossed her legs at the ankles. Sark raised his eyebrow at her relaxed movement. “Basically, I will die a hero, and you will die a coward.”

Sark pushed himself from the counter. “Do you truly believe that?”

She looked him right in the eye. “Yes.”

“Your mother was right then,” he said.

“My mother?”

“You have too much pride. That’s called arrogance, Sydney.”

“Look who’s talking,” she mumbled.

“I heard that,” Sark said with a small smile. He walked over to her again, standing behind the chair. “I won’t ask you this again. Are you going to cooperate?”

“If I don’t?”

“Then, you will die a hero.”

“Then, I guess I have no choice,” Sydney said.

“Excellent.” Sark stepped forward to face her. “Where is—“

“Kill me.”

Sark was surprised by her request. He paused before speaking again. “This is what you want?”

She kept her eyes trained on him as if daring him to kill her.

But Sark refused. “Just tell me where the—“

“Sark.” Her voice was unwavering. “I’m not going to answer your questions.”

“Very well then.” He reached behind his back and revealed the handgun. “It’s a pity. I always thought you were a fighter, someone who had a lot to live for.”

“I don’t need your pity,” she said.

“I’m not giving you any.” He raised the gun, aiming the barrel in between her eyes. She did not close them. “Any last words?”

“Yeah,” she smirked, “see you in hell.”

Sark pulled the trigger instantly.

Sydney jumped in her seat. She blinked. Once. Twice. She inhaled. Once. Twice. Exhaled. She turned around to look at the bullet hole in the wall, and then up at Sark. Her face filled with shock.

He lowered his gun with a shaky arm. “You stupid woman. Stupid. Stupid.”

She was too stunned to say anything.

He knelt down next to her. “Never ask me to kill you.”

“Why?” she asked in a raspy whisper.

“Because one day,” he placed a hand gently on her knee, “I might.”

THE END

**

Dude. I was struggling with NOT having Sark kill Sydney. I wanted to so badly. He did too! And I realize that the title has nothing to do with the fic, but *shrug* so what? I'm the writer.

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[info]becca_radcgg

May 27 2004, 00:05:45 UTC 7 years ago

wow. Another little piece of brilliance.

“Excellent.” Sark stepped forward to face her. “Where is—“

“Kill me.”


Wow, completely unexpected again. Love that. I mean, I knew that she wasn't going to give in, but he obviously didn't. You really sell it there too.

He knelt down next to her. “Never ask me to kill you.”

“Why?” she asked in a raspy whisper.

“Because one day,” he placed a hand gently on her knee, “I might.”


Very very true! Because one day he might. I love how you ended it. Fabulous as always.

[info]ossiannic

May 27 2004, 06:23:57 UTC 7 years ago

"So, when are you going to toss in the apples, Sark?"

Heh. Now that's the old Sydney that we know and love.


"Then, I guess I have no choice," Sydney said.

"Excellent." Sark stepped forward to face her. "Where is—"

"Kill me."


I love the snap in those lines. Sark's survival instinct is so strong that it must seem just inconceivable to him that anyone would choose death when given any other alternative.

And then that ending... You've done a great job with this piece. Very cool.



[info]egirl

May 27 2004, 07:30:44 UTC 7 years ago

You damn RIGHT it's zingy! That was just sensational - you should do zingy vignettes more often, methinks!

Happy Birthday, too - not sure exactly when it was, since I didn't KNOW when it was - but I hope it was a great one for you! :-D

*hugs*




Emma.

[info]kismeteve

May 27 2004, 08:18:04 UTC 7 years ago

Oh, this was so good. I loved the dialogue, which was quick and snappy without sacrificing the tension between them. I love how Sark scared the bejesus out of Syd and was like "don't fuck with me." Sometimes I think she needs to be reminded that he's dangerous.

[info]nicblue0707

May 27 2004, 08:22:08 UTC 7 years ago

This is great! I just stopped over for a second before I head out on some errands, but I couldn't resist reading this - and I so glad that I did!

Wow.

First of all, what a great use of the water requirement. Not at all what I would have thought or thought of - very, very clever and creative. Very Alias, very canon. :clap:

Second, I've got to quote this part:
She tossed her head back, drops of water dripping off her dark strands of hair. She stared at him silently.

“You haven’t given me the information I need.” He reached for a towel and proceeded to dry her face. She recoiled from his touch. “I’m trying to be a gentleman here.”

Sydney rolled her eyes. “What gentleman chains a woman to a chair and threatens her life?”

Sark tried to wipe her face again. She let him this time. “That would be me.” His mouth turned into another smirk. He finished drying her face and dropped the towel. “Now, are you going to answer my questions?”


Sigh. Perfection. It really is. It's the Sarkney banter that we all know and love, and yet, there is more to it, insofar as Sark really does see himself as at least gentlemanly, if not an actual gentleman, particularly in this situation.

I understand the impulse - Sark's impulse (LOL) - to kill Sydney, but I really like the way you've left it, at somewhat of a stalemate.

I could keep going, but I really do have stuff to do today. :)

This is just great though. I adore it!

[info]vaznetti

May 27 2004, 09:50:45 UTC 7 years ago

Wow! First of all, thank you so much--this is amazing! I really loved the way the conversation between the two of them moves along, and the ending was rather tense. To say the least.

I particularly like the Sydney characterisation here--I miss stong-willed Sydney, even if she is verging on pig-headed at times.

[info]superswank

May 27 2004, 20:23:28 UTC 7 years ago

Oooh, great fic!

"Had enough?" asked the cool voice.

She licked her lips and glanced up at the calm face. "So, when are you going to toss in the apples, Sark?"


Love. Classic Syd/Sark, with the zinging taunts.

Wonderful job. :)

[info]lil_button

June 3 2004, 01:06:49 UTC 7 years ago

This was incredibly creative--the kind of Sarkney I love to read. I'm in love with the ending, which totally dredges up their history--he's had the chance to kill her many times and hasn't taken it. And the one time she asks him to kill her, he doesn't.

“Excellent.” Sark stepped forward to face her. “Where is—“
And we never do find out what Sark wants, do we? It just comes to prove that the characters themselves were more important at that time and place than the back story of how they got their.

“So, when are you going to toss in the apples, Sark?”
*snicker*

[info]kyizi

June 3 2004, 14:18:54 UTC 7 years ago


This was great, it proves that size really doesn't matter! ;)

They were wonderfully well writte and completely in character. I actually thought he'd shot her for a moment. You have no idea how much I want to know what happened next! lol!

The quirk with the apples was wonderful, so Sydney. ;)

He knelt down next to her. “Never ask me to kill you.”

“Why?” she asked in a raspy whisper.

“Because one day,” he placed a hand gently on her knee, “I might.”


Wow. What a way to end a fic! Great stuff.

[info]adjectivegirl

November 28 2004, 13:43:37 UTC 7 years ago

Great dialogue, I could easily see this in any given episode. Sydney's propensity for snark under pressure and Sark's cool derision? Picture perfect.

[info]julia_thorne13

March 12 2005, 19:00:42 UTC 7 years ago

This fic is razor blade sharp. It's a brilliant little piece of work and I LOFF it!

He knelt down next to her. “Never ask me to kill you.”

“Why?” she asked in a raspy whisper.

“Because one day,” he placed a hand gently on her knee, “I might.”


Beautiful like woah!
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